Re: Dec 09 by ramblinglibrarianhttp://sharedcopy.com/public/users/ramblinglibrarian/dec+09/comments.xmlsharedcopy.comhttp://sharedcopy.com/images/logo-sharedcopy.png?V0Ivan ChewTor.com / Science fiction and fantasy / Stories / The Horrid Glory of Its Wings by Elizabeth Bear and John Jude Palencarhttp://www.tor.com.sharedcopy.com/f24a9b4a88ca789c7c7e180189587abf.html#55873Fri, 11 Dec 2009 18:50:53 +0000 <span class="content comments_count_7 withoutphoto"
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> Use of graphics/ illustration to reinforce/ enhance the page content. <a href="http://r2.sharedcopy.com/7i9adkl2#shcp0"
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> Example of a hook. Notice "My mother" and "harpy". Three things conveyed here: This is a child; a secret is implied; it involves a mythical creature. <a href="http://r2.sharedcopy.com/7i9adkl2#shcp1"
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> Seems to me that writing about the girl's physical condition here is a way to sustain the reader's interest. Preceding paras are about seemingly mundane details that set the context of the story. <br /><br />So this para here is to add in new and interesting plot ideas. <a href="http://r2.sharedcopy.com/7i9adkl2#shcp2"
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> Notice the use of White Spaces. <a href="http://r2.sharedcopy.com/7i9adkl2#shcp3"
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> Notice how this one sentence has been singled out, for emphasis. <a href="http://r2.sharedcopy.com/7i9adkl2#shcp4"
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> Statement is singled out for emphasis. <a href="http://r2.sharedcopy.com/7i9adkl2#shcp5"
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> The plot idea: of a mythical creature coexisting with a typical city setting. <a href="http://r2.sharedcopy.com/7i9adkl2#shcp6"
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