Copied webpages by wohalihttp://sharedcopy.com/public/users/wohali.xmlsharedcopy.comhttp://sharedcopy.com/images/logo-sharedcopy.png?V0Joan TouzetDraft for CAL09 - TeamEdTechhttp://innovations.oise.utoronto.ca.sharedcopy.com/TeamEdTech/index.php/94b60a4f544455b18820c110b8357de2.html#22044Thu, 25 Sep 2008 02:14:03 +0800 <span class="content comments_count_11 withoutphoto"
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> Changed to active voice in a few places to save words and clarify. <a href="http://r5.sharedcopy.com/4kmo54ul#shcp4"
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>development<a href="http://r5.sharedcopy.com/4kmo54ul#shcp5"
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> Is it really development? I think it's investigation/research <a href="http://r5.sharedcopy.com/4kmo54ul#shcp6"
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> Discussion is the logical extension of writing, and also ties into synchronous affordances more clearly <a href="http://r5.sharedcopy.com/4kmo54ul#shcp8"
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> I removed your example to make room to discuss synchronous technologies. Put it back if you think I went on too long and it's important for the abstract. I don't want to lose the point, though, it's a good one for inclusion in the eventual paper <a href="http://r5.sharedcopy.com/4kmo54ul#shcp10"
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>sense of community<a href="http://r5.sharedcopy.com/4kmo54ul#shcp11"
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> I think this is spot-on with what the CAL themes are ("Place and space", "digital worlds"). we could even strengthen the text here more if we wanted to discuss the creation of a graduate student digital agora. I had it but removed it for length. <a href="http://r5.sharedcopy.com/4kmo54ul#shcp12"
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